Writing 101 Day 5- Be Brief


The wind blows it into my palm

I am captured

This is your last chance to save us.  You complete me. Save us.

I glance around

The man in the dark coat

Polished black

shoes, briefcase

Dense glasses

Hiding eyes

Hiding pain?

I glance around

Long blue dress

Floating, swaying

Lifting in the wind

Long red hair

Hiding eyes

Hiding pain?

The wind blows

my hand opens

I am released

101 challenge today “You stumble upon a random letter on the path. You read it. It affects you deeply, and you wish it could be returned to the person to which it’s addressed. Write a story about this encounter. Today’s twist: Approach this post in as few words as possible”


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